Posters roughs

Based on the thumbnails I did for posters after looking at Simon Page, I designed the above roughs. I initially felt really good about them, but once I tried to take them into production, I had a lot of problems with actually pulling the designs off.

Venus and Uranus showed some promise, but I feel as though the rough brush aesthetic was starting to fall apart once I applied it to large poster designs and getting the balance of negative space from poster to poster was hard as the set started to look messy.
I think the layout needs to be tweaked to be more uniform and tidy.